If you are describing an event, you will need to write your paragraphs in chronological order.
My earliest memories of it are fractured images of sights and sounds and smells--golden bars of sunlight through majestic oaks and elms, the ever-present smell of wood smoke and haunting echoes This is just a description of a room — but we already feel powerfully impelled to read on.
And one easy test: take one of your scenes and highlight anything that references a non-visual sense. It got crushed in the middle, and whoever tried to peel the labels off stopped because the red and gold paint came off too, leaving silver scratches that rust. Certain colors are specific, as in cherry-red cheeks and light blue, and descriptions help to visualize the object: the parted hair, the color line on the suit, and the grapefruit analogy.
Offering a full range of sensory information will enhance your descriptive writing. No spot on earth, however, has yet surpassed the beauty of my childhood paradise, a place my family called Tamarack.
Even with a setting like Hogwarts — a place readers really do want to know all the hidden details of — J. After all that, he plainly states his affection for it. You can have declarations of love happen in idyllic meadows, as in Twilight by Stephenie Meyer, but why not at a bus stop in the rain?
A good descriptive essay accomplishes this impact by using a more detailed observation and description. He may snuggle up against your ankle, begging to be petted, or he may imitate a skunk and stain your favorite trousers.
For the objects inside, she uses many descriptors of what materials they are made from. That means telling the reader where they are in a paragraph or soclose to the start of any new scene.